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Tom Schecter's avatar

Man, lupus has some WEIRD symptoms.

MA Knight's avatar

It’s all downhill from here, Tom.

Richard Pack's avatar

OK. Bianca. Look. I get it, she's hot and she's into you and you're a world champion red-flag dodger, but maybe, (just maybe), if she's literally hot enough to melt ice in moments and has to gnaw on her hand to keep from ripping a guy's throat out maaaaaybe ask some more questions?

No? Straight to the shifty motel?

OK.

(Love seeing this series in my inbox, thanks for another great chapter)

MA Knight's avatar

Everything is fine!!! They’re doing great!!!

Thanks for reading, Richard (: I appreciate you.

Edith Bow's avatar

The cliffhanger will literally wreck me until you write the next part. I will have you know. I fuckin love these. I'm a sucker for this horror romance. Damnnnnn.

MA Knight's avatar

Thank you Edith! That means a lot to me, truly. I’m grateful to be able to share my excitement about this haha

Helen Grover's avatar

Really thought the “no you wouldn’t” bit was gonna turn out to be a cannibalism thing but I was pleasantly surprised it wasn’t.

Billy is a terrible bartender. Mine gives me chocolate milk

MA Knight's avatar

Billy is grumpy… not living his dream. Chocolate milk is so good. Strawberry milk is my fav 💗

Alex Shifman's avatar

Love a throat punch!

MA Knight's avatar

Satisfying, isn’t it?

Sapna's avatar

I am all hot and bothered right now. The punch was so satisfying, ughhhhhh.

MA Knight's avatar

Cam sucks!!!

L.T. Aldous's avatar

DAMN I'm excited what Wade's warning is about - Is it for Gwen? Or Bianca? Does he know the real reason behind Gwen's illness?

I've been trying to think of ways to describe your writing since the first part. I think it has so much motion. Your writing feels living, breathing with each sentence. I can picture everything so vividly. It moves, and I love it!

MA Knight's avatar

Wow wow wow. Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read (: happy to leave you wondering with a cliffhanger, too hehe

Bea's avatar

This is amazeballs. It’s such a well rounded story already. I love Bianca and Gwen so much! Strangest case of Lupus I’ve ever seen lol 😝 but I love all of this.

MA Knight's avatar

Thank you for reading, Bea! <333

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

Oh you can’t just leave it there 😭😭 god what a satisfying throat punch tho 🤘

MA Knight's avatar

He deserved it. Don’t worry: next installment incoming !!!

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

Yesyesyes

Gil Nobodi's avatar

Holy shit! “Holy shit!” 🤣👏

MA Knight's avatar

Peak interiority, no?

Gil Nobodi's avatar

🙇

Jamie's Grim Tabulations's avatar

Bianca and I are strawberry daiquiri twins.

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MA Knight's avatar

Hehehe thank you! I’m hoping to up up up the intensity going forward. Thanks for reading and immersing yourself!! 💗