When I do dev and talk about sensory details I really should just highlight this freezer scene as an example. It was so vivid & incredible. So glad I saved this until after the holidays. 💜 It's my favorite series for real.
oh the dread. I really had to force myself to finish the chapter because I knew heartache was coming. So good and so painful! Truly, you did such a great job with the emotions and the transformation. UGH my heart hurt so bad! And I cringed away from Gwen! 😭 I felt that need to run away. awesome.
I’m so glad I had a moment to sit and read! This story blocks out the background noise of my children lol which is basically a magic trick. Lupus indeed 🤥
Oh my GOD. 😱 This is giving such gingersnaps vibes and I’m here for it 🤘
Thank you emily!!! Gingersnaps rocks
Looove that movie. And the sequels even though they’re not as good lol
Haven’t seen the sequels yet
They’re not as good, but still fun :)
When I do dev and talk about sensory details I really should just highlight this freezer scene as an example. It was so vivid & incredible. So glad I saved this until after the holidays. 💜 It's my favorite series for real.
This made me fist bump the air. I appreciate you!
In House M.D.' voice: "THIS IS NOT LUPUS!!!"
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oh the dread. I really had to force myself to finish the chapter because I knew heartache was coming. So good and so painful! Truly, you did such a great job with the emotions and the transformation. UGH my heart hurt so bad! And I cringed away from Gwen! 😭 I felt that need to run away. awesome.
💗💗💗 it pleases me to hurt your heart, no offense. Hopefully it’ll be worth it in the end. Thank you.
Wreck me
The mix of limerence and outright body horror is a total novel combination that’s making my head spin
Thank you! The yearning can be monstrous!
The walk-in freezer scene is pure panic cinema. nice!
Thanks Mac!!!!
This had such a grip on me. The tension during the freezer scene being broken by the lupus is fucked up line.
Heheheh I’m glad it worked for you! Thanks so much!
Ahhh! I was so stressed reading thissss!!!!!!! 🖤😂
Excellent 🖤
I’m so glad I had a moment to sit and read! This story blocks out the background noise of my children lol which is basically a magic trick. Lupus indeed 🤥
Riveting! So so good.
Thank you! 💗
This had me in such a grip I didn't even open my ice cream and now it's melted
Hehehe yay!!! Thank you 💗
This was so good, am hooked!
Love the way this is progressing. Not sure what to add atm other than that
Thanks, Helen!
Ohmygodddddd Gwen mid-transformation is everything, so raw! Rawer than the pork!
Amazing stuff!
Rawer than the pork yesss not even processed. Thank you 💗💗
So. Fucking. Good.
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