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Wendy Russell's avatar

Oh, thank fuck it wasnt Smokey...

Love the different pov, it's such a wee thrill to realise you're suddenly in someone else's head, getting a different lens on the story.

MA Knight's avatar

I’m so glad!!! I was nervous about it

Wendy Russell's avatar

No, you nailed it because you didnt drop it too soon. We're all invested now, so you could pretty much chuck anything at us and we'd trust you. Seriously, really wonderful storytelling.

MA Knight's avatar

Sheeeeesh. Thank you, Wendy. I’ll try to chuck something GOOD! Your trust, and the trust of anyone else who is following along, means a lot to me 💗

RM Greta's avatar

ahhh terrifying! Not Smokey! Brilliant telling it from Emilio's point of view. Thank you for this little treat. Now I can make it to Monday.

MA Knight's avatar

Thank you!!!! 🧁 treats for all!!!

Helen Grover's avatar

So I almost commented this on a previous post but I worried it was too mean:

I really want a Nope style ending for Emilio (this may only make sense if you’ve seen the movie bc I’m not sure how to summarize without giving stuff away). I’m thinking of the camera man character.

And I basically got what I wanted anyway🥰

MA Knight's avatar

Ok I haven’t seen Nope but now I have to ahhahaha

Bea's avatar

DAD DAD DAD DAD! Lol maybe I’m tired, but that made me chuckle. Also, glad it wasn’t Smokey!

MA Knight's avatar

I’m so glad it made you chuckle!!! And no comment 🩷🩷🩷

Saint-Lazare's avatar

Whaaaaaaaaat?????

Caroline Osella   (they/them)'s avatar

Feeling so worried about absolutely everybody here. Lezpash certainly turned terror, and I can only hold pathetic hope in you that you'll bring us back full circle to that happy place.

MA Knight's avatar

💗💗💗your worry and hope is so appreciated

Hylia Corvidae's avatar

Oh damn

Edith Bow's avatar

Now all I can think about are super hairy dudes and I cringe at the thought their hair is coarse not soft. 😂. Good tension though. Nice little morsel.

MA Knight's avatar

Hahahah. Luckily E only saw from a distance and didn’t touch… 🐶

quiet nymph 🐚's avatar

it feels like a diary reading this, i love the audio use. you and emily did a great job ! also i love the consistency of posting the story. it reminds me of gravity falls !

MA Knight's avatar

Yes, Emily is a beast!!! I’m glad it feels like a diary, it’s supposed to be pretty stream-of-consciousness

Tom Schecter's avatar

Woof

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

Oh shit 😱