Thank you 🩷 I’ve thought about it. A little intimidated about creating a character that would interact with other characters others created and keeping it consistent/staying in my lane. But it would be a wonderful challenge…
Emil would be your editor, so he helps with the direction & vibe so it's not as scary. It felt intimidating at first but I would just pick a story, already on there. A character you like and run it. It's a choose your own adventure. I get it though. There's a lot on there 😭. Actually I know a few characters that would be easy to slide into pretty quickly. If you wanted bullet lore.
Oh my god, so many things that made me put a hand over my face like I was watching a horror movie I couldn't look away from.
There are so many lovely turns of phrase that are so, so horrible in the context. The fourth to last paragraph, when Sarah-Beth does her handiwork on Mullet Boy had me groaning and wincing in turns.
Wow what a perfectly twisted and demented character. Truly a free woman in your insanity. The song choice was perfect, it made this read as a movie scene
This feels like a legendary horror character. Feels like the ‘or else’ after “treat girls good” in place of the classic horror “don’t have sex or party”
Damn this is good. You should submit something to the hotel. It's so good. Loved the sensory. Nice and icky.
Thank you 🩷 I’ve thought about it. A little intimidated about creating a character that would interact with other characters others created and keeping it consistent/staying in my lane. But it would be a wonderful challenge…
Emil would be your editor, so he helps with the direction & vibe so it's not as scary. It felt intimidating at first but I would just pick a story, already on there. A character you like and run it. It's a choose your own adventure. I get it though. There's a lot on there 😭. Actually I know a few characters that would be easy to slide into pretty quickly. If you wanted bullet lore.
That would be lovely, if you don’t mind!
Goddamn twisted. I loved it.
Fuck yeah. THANK YOU
Oh my god, so many things that made me put a hand over my face like I was watching a horror movie I couldn't look away from.
There are so many lovely turns of phrase that are so, so horrible in the context. The fourth to last paragraph, when Sarah-Beth does her handiwork on Mullet Boy had me groaning and wincing in turns.
Ohhhh this is a dream come true to hear 👅 thank you for reading. One of my big fears is getting my tongue cut out…so.
Hey so this is insane lol
Please write more
I’m trying my darndest 🩷 thank you, AD!!!
OF COURSE <333
I’m horrified. Good work!!
😍 thank you, Brooke!
Liked the language
Thanks!
// just wow
😀
Wow what a perfectly twisted and demented character. Truly a free woman in your insanity. The song choice was perfect, it made this read as a movie scene
Ahhhh thank you so much!!!! And thank you for listening to the song 🩷 I love putting classic country music in creepy contexts lol
And the award for greatest simile of all time goes to.... drumroll please........."His hair like poopy chick feathers."
🐣 thank you, will! You must have seen a poopy chick before
I’ve seen more than I care to admit
Luckily, I drank myself out of college in a matter of weeks 😏 Guess who's safe from Sarah-Beth! Fun story! Those frat boys had it coming...
Thanks for reading the ~final-~ version :-D
Wait, that's from the person who leaves "what the fuuuuu" on my posts? COME ON & WHAT THE FUUUUπ
Heh heh heh. A different type of wtf.
A whole other LEVEL you mean ma’am 🫡
Oh please, you cosmic horror mastermind. You’re no empty skullcap!
Geee are you trying to make me vain, you mad gore genius?
You’re already covered in gold and jewels… it’s only fitting
That's the crypt uniform. I prefer to hang out bare bones actually 🤭
Wow this did not disappoint 😇👻 great work
Thanks, Adriane! I’m so glad 💙
mullet boy! this is wild. hell yeah.
Careful with that party in the back. Thank you!
"she wrenched him by his party-in-the-back" 😹
heheheheheh
This feels like a legendary horror character. Feels like the ‘or else’ after “treat girls good” in place of the classic horror “don’t have sex or party”
Yes. This doesn’t map on directly (Rhett isn’t here or killed), but frat boys have a reputation, and frat houses have a culture.
And Sarah Beth has crushes.
wow the tenderness is what makes this story work!
Thanks for noticing that, Marcello! I wasn’t interested in the more psychopathic/apathetic serial killer motivations.