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Gaby Brogan's avatar

Such vivid imagery! each line is like a punch of new information - I love the way you opened with the concept of a man choking on the cherry seeds, and closed with the pit sprouting. Death and life. Beautiful writing. Off to check out your other stuff!

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MA Knight's avatar

Woohoo! Thanks for reading. Drabbles are really fun bites-sized challenges 🍒

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R. M. Greta's avatar

I yearn for Eve. Great storytelling in such a small format!

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MA Knight's avatar

Don’t we all? Thank you!!

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