Such vivid imagery! each line is like a punch of new information - I love the way you opened with the concept of a man choking on the cherry seeds, and closed with the pit sprouting. Death and life. Beautiful writing. Off to check out your other stuff!
this reminds me of suzanne by leonard cohen <3
Beautiful song. Thank you so much!
Such vivid imagery! each line is like a punch of new information - I love the way you opened with the concept of a man choking on the cherry seeds, and closed with the pit sprouting. Death and life. Beautiful writing. Off to check out your other stuff!
Woohoo! Thanks for reading. Drabbles are really fun bites-sized challenges 🍒
I yearn for Eve. Great storytelling in such a small format!
Don’t we all? Thank you!!